Favorite Thanksgiving or turkey

I’m pretty sure that most of you haven’t written about the best Thanksgiving Day turkey that you’ve ever tasted, but here’s your chance.  Holidays evoke memories and emotions so let it all-hang-out!  I for one remember the final time that I had Thanksgiving with my mother.  I came home that night because one of the boys had a hockey tournament over the weekend. We had a great stuffed turkey and laughed and my brother’s and families were all together but on Friday when I returned from the hockey game there was a phone message from one of my brothers.  Our dad was found dead in the morning from an apparent heart attack. 

When I wrote about it, I had to distance myself from my emotions.

You go ahead and write about your favorite Thanksgiving or turkey. Was it good just because you and your loved one were together?  Or did the turkey turn out to be drier than beef jerky?  

Set your timer for 15 minutes and write about it.  Those of you who can’t stand the holiday, go ahead write about why you don’t.  Enjoy the exercise.

Are you done?  Sorry, I didn’t write about it.  I picture our family together and find it difficult to write.  I guess that I’m just not ready.

Happy Thanksgiving!

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Barb

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Which character? Fish out of water.

Is your setting set in nature? Do you walk in the woods or is it in town with noise? Let’s pretend that your primary character is walking in the woods and is unused to all the sights and sounds of the rustling and riffling of the leaves or crunching from smaller animals.  Has this person ever come straight up with a deer? What will they feel like? What are they seeing? Do they fear the sounds of cracking of the trees?  Let’s write about it, shall we?

Let’s begin by choosing a character that needs to be shaken up!  If you’re in the middle of a project and don’t quite know where to go—you know what I’m talking about.  Let’s take a fish out of water and see what this person will do.  They are people, right!

Once you’ve chosen your person or character, set the timer for 20 minutes and begin to write.  Here’s some of what I wrote:

                I woke early in the morning and looked out across the back yard and wondered where the devil I was. The early morning sun helped clear my head as I sat up and listened. I wasn’t used to living in town with traffic and voices. I found it interesting and bothersome. At home where there was silence and only a loud muffler once in a while is all the noise I heard.  How am I going to manage here, by myself, in search of my lost childhood friend?

Okay! Stop the timer if you haven’t already.  Above is a portion of what I wrote.  I started with a paragraph from one of my books and then changed the whole book in one sweep of a few words.  ‘where the devil I was’.  The whole perspective and story itself is completely different from the published book.  Wow! I could write a new book with that paragraph.

   Go ahead and write-write-write!  Enjoy the day!

Barb

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The Emotion

Now that you’ve worked out what emotions are strong in your writing, let’s write about something that was very emotional.  I know that we’ve already covered emotions, but they’re worthwhile to dig deeper to really discover the emotions within ourselves.

     I know that when my mother passed away, I couldn’t cry.  It hurt way too much.  I didn’t cry for three months.  I must say, though, that my dad has passed away nine months earlier so it was like a double-whammy. The silence was deadly.  It was when the time change came upon us when it hit.  Dad always called to remind me.  Mom would call and say that she’d missed changing the coffeepot timer the night before and it started too early, waking her.  The silence from not hearing from either one brought the tears. The realization that life was fleeting suddenly hit me.  I cried buckets.

      The other life changing occurrence was when my oldest and later youngest went for basic training. Fortunately, the youngest went in the National Guard wasn’t away from home for too long but the other was gone for four years.  That made me nuts, I really missed my son.  I’m a visual person.  I put pictures of him all over the house.  The pictures saved my sanity. When we’d speak on the phone, I’d look all around to see where the voice was coming from even though I knew he was safe in Germany. 

      Why don’t you take fifteen minutes and write about the hardest, life-changing event?  Set the timer and begin writing.  This will pull out all emotions, good or bad.  After, count them and see how many of each of the five senses you used the most.  It’s a great beginning for a story or a book.  It’ll draw your readers in and want to read more. 

    Do it!

  

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Emotions. Do you display them?

 Have you described your emotions on the page? Every scene is emotional.  It may not be a said emotion, but it must be conveyed. When my son enlisted in the army, I was proud of him but at the same time, my heart sunk to my knees.  I knew what the future would bring.  How do you describe the bittersweet? Here’s what I wrote to myself at the time:

    There’s that salad, sitting out on the front porch waiting for the guests to arrive with their contributions of hotdishes to add to the potluck.

    Potluck you say? What else could it be? My son is going away—far away—into the army and I feel that I will never see him again. The neighbors, friends and relatives have all been invited to attend the open house.

   Where is the kid? Oh! There he is dressed in his new shirt and jeans and youthful smile that shows how naïve and vulnerable he is—truly—coming from a mom and pop family and going where no man has before—an army of one--. 

    My son who has his young fiancé—too young and immature—stands on the other side of him. I’m supposed to be the love of his life.  

    The guests are arriving time to for me to pull myself together. 

  What am I not telling you?  What of the five senses am I displaying?  Am I displaying true emotion?  I’d like to know what you think.  

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Characters and senses. Their likes and dislikes.

Have you ever thought writing about rooms in your house as worthwhile?  I didn’t either until I tried it.  Describe what you see in the kitchen or do you want to begin with the family room?  It doesn’t really matter.  We’ll get to know your characters likes and dislikes.  Are you the main character or most of you, I should say?  I am in an awful lot of my books.  Mostly it’s me.  In The Broken Circle, most of me was in it. I had been a teacher and knew the classroom scenes plus had a boyfriend who went to Vietnam while serving in the Marines.  In my White House Dollhouse series, I always loved dolls and am a history buff. Who are you in your books?  Let’s find out your likes and dislikes.

     Choose a room and it really doesn’t have to be from your home, but it must evoke strong memories. Set your timer for five minutes, then write about the room. Put down any details that you remember about the room. When the timer goes off, then stop.

      Circle all visual words.  How many did you use? Write down the number.

      Circle all words that make sounds—verbs. How many? Enter the number.

      Continue with smell, taste and touch. 

     How many words for each of the senses?  Now you know where your strength and weaknesses are.  

     Now go ahead and add your character in the room and see what happens.  If you don’t care for the character you added then try another one.  You’ll see how each character responds to different settings.

     I hope this helps you in your writing.

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Is your book set in a hobby store?

Is your book set in a hobby store?

My mystery series is set in a White House dollhouse store.  I started having problems almost immediately because of the age differences between the person who raised her from a little girl and her knowledge of the first ladies.  How could a girl in her early twenties know so much about the first ladies plus all the nuances surrounding the many presidents? I had to make her educated and a little older.

My corner of the characters’ universe was drawn, I decided upon the First Lady Dolley Madison  as the first miniature doll plus the president. I had already researched Dolley and was in love with her. I wanted to make her as important as the main character. So, I speak to my dolls frequently which allows the reader to learn a little bit of history.

In all four novels the store is in a brown stone building which was built at the turn of the 20^th century, right around 1880-1920. The building age fits the concept of what I was after—older buildings—quaint and interesting.  However, I change a building here and there, using new ownership and businesses.

As the reader follows along in SPANGLED to DEATH I have the characters eating at a local coffee house near where she lives, The Riverview.

Who occupies the diner? Coffeeshop? Do you have a garden? This and more is all part of your setting? Who tends the garden and buries the dead at night under a moonless night? Are there bushes nearby for the killer to hide behind?  Maybe you’re not writing a mystery, but there is always a character that’s a little odd or different, isn’t there? What makes them odd? The block they live on or what the house looks like? 

Know your setting and characters then the book will come to you.

Happy writing and have fun!

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Draw the setting!

You can’t draw, you say?  Well…you just might be better than you think you are!  

Go and get a sheet of typing paper, get two—and tape them together. Now you’ll have two blocks of your little imaginary town or ‘real’ town.  Stick figures are not so hard to draw. With a ruler you can draw the middle street just by tracing either side of the utensil.

Don’t tell me you can’t draw a house or other buildings!  Yes, you can!  Take that ruler and trace a line about three inches above the top and bottom of the page from—the middle ruler line.  For my book, Body on the Tracks, I taped 20-25 paper sheets together and had them all around my dining room table. Since it’s a train book, I drew in railroad tracks instead of a road.  Where your buildings are, draw a vertical line down to the sidewalk or street. Do you see? It’s all drawn with a ruler.

How many store fronts do you need? Pencil in the store name or if it’s a neighborhood, the family name. Afterwards, decorate. Get to know if this business or home has flowers. Trees? Swingsets? This may mean children.

Now you’ll meet your characters on their own playing field.  In Body on the Tracks, I placed Victory Gardens along the way and mentioned towns and news about the Zephyrettes and how they assisted the women and children.

I wouldn’t have been able to get the time zones correct or the people in the cars without the use of my drawings.

Now you know what to do and how to get started on getting to know your settings and characters better.

Have fun!

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Barb

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